Please Make Corrections if Necessary

by Mirch Masala
(Karachi, Pakistan)

"It is sometimes very irritating when people start judging you and your behavior, trying to find out reasons behind them and end up giving stupid conclusive remarks."

Ola's answer:

Here is the corrected version (I've also corrected some typos):

"It is sometimes very irritating when people start judging you and your behavior, trying to find out reasons behind them for it, and ending up giving you stupid conclusive remarks."