Please Make Corrections to this Paragraph if it is Needed

by Mirch Masala
(Karachi, Pakistan)

"The worst part of this life is to ignore the person whom i dont want to ignore. For me, to ignore him means to insult him. God knows better how much i have respect for him in my heart.

Ola's answer:

Well, this is almost like poetry ;)

I won't go into it poetically, but we can look into the grammar of it."

Here goes:

"The worst part of this life is to ignore the person whom I don't want to ignore. For me, to ignore him means to insult him. God knows best how much I truly respect him inside."

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Jul 09, 2011
Thanks!
by: Mirch Masala

Thanks ma'am for replying and also for realizing my feelings ;).

It will surely benefit me.

Take care.

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